6 Nisan 2011 Çarşamba

thanks for my friends...

-Some experts have an agreement about the sedentary life style has many negative effects on people.

-In winters, the number of people who are below poverty line increases rapidly.

-After everyone had ratified the contract, a man invited us to eat something for dinner.

-She thinks that, she has to flaunt with her shoes, accessories or bags because of her higher position.

-We can use renewable energy sources such as sun power, wind or rain to prevent to air pollution.

-In this festival, you can meet your acquaintances.

-I can facilitate my mother's responsibilities about housework.

-A man, who have big family, gave an oath to his children to go dinner in the new restaurant.

-In this place, we usually saw a man who try to bribe quickly to enter the museum.

-This school will divide the students in three classes according to their aptitudes.

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  1. There are some good examples here Sevde. Here are some corrections and suggestions below.

    -Some experts agree that a sedentary lifestyle has many negative effects.

    -In winter, the number of people who are below the poverty line increase rapidly.

    -She thinks that she has to flaunt her shoes, accessories, or bags to show her high status.

    -I can facilitate my mother's difficulty with household chores.

    -There was a man with a big family that gave an oath to his children to go to dinner at the new restaurant.

    -We saw a man who tried to give a bribe in order to enter the museum faster.

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  2. Thanks for all corrections and suggestions. Have a good evening

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